SewerShark's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Planet Family 1]

Well...

for a first gland, is a great cartoon, but some flaw kept me on the hold.

For instance, the cartoon sound effects, they are a bit anoying and over-used...every cartoon (and I'm no talking about flash cartoons) use them, expecially Hanna-Barbera. Try to use deferent sounds.

Second, it was to action intensive...I mean, lots of jokes, one after another, without a a chance to breath. You must put somecalm parts before another joke, or joke series. Its like having a math clash with that monotone voiced teacher, you just get sleepy and lost.

You have a great potential, just explore it more

[Attack of The Svankers!]

To be fair enough

First of all, for all those who said that "this is and american site, make the flash in english or get blammed"...Shut up in your mediocrity...Either you are a shitty american (not a "hating all americans" speech) os a dumb, brainless america ass kisser.

But in a ponit, I agree, the subtitles could have been in english, or athe least a language selection thingy. But you should never do the flash with english sounds just because this is an "american site". I know I wouldn't, cause I§m not american.

Now, for your flash, I really didn't catch the Idea, Sorry, mebbe is because I didn't know what they were talking, or mebbe I'm slow (LOL), anyway, try to get more action to it, instead of long scenes with still, or almost still scenes.

And try to empove tre graphics, I think you can make a excelent flash with some hard work and more experience.

And this is not a bashing review

Funkylikamonkey responds:

The reason i guess that it isnt that clear whats going on in this movie is because the whole 'svanker' joke is one that i am always using on my younger brother and he always laughs. I guess i should make it more clear to people who have no idea what a svanker is...

[Magic Demency Big Escape]

OMFG

As soon I saw the stick figures, I got seizures and closed it...

PS: Badly draw stick figures

[AIC 1 - Procrastination]

Can be better

I mean, it have a lot of potential, but some flaws need to be fixed.

1- lip sinc. On long lines, the sound ends before the mouth ends, leaving long boring blank spaces.

2- Layers. Careful with that, one cene i've noticed that Alex Mouth was in front of Josh face...I mean, only his mouth...AND THATS FREAKY, MAAAAAN.

and... oh yeah, the girl's voice, as you already stated =P

HAM-Mosessess responds:

your mom can be better

[Spookyville USA]

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE

MAKE IT MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE @_@

[Paranoid I]

...

I've only seen a few good Clacks/locks/fucks/whatevah good movies...
and this is not one of them.

As far as I can see, this is a Noir/Suspence/Terror wannabe with a clock...

Sorry, Im not a vegetable/fruit/inanimated objects with lock/clock/ass faces.

PlexityMusic responds:

Care to tell my why? Is it just because there's a clock in it? Then that's just wrong!

[Snow Destroy SHOW (DanST)]

hmmmm

2 words and an abreviation: Study More 3D...
acctualy...more flash and drawing as well.........and more cinematics.....

Just...Study more, ok?

[Gaia: Glichino Mansion06]

...

This sucks ass more than ass can suck this.

Nuff Said

Latiena responds:

You've been reported.

[Dumbstruck]

The animation is good...

And could be better, since only the guy that moves...anyway, what I think it could be better was if you add some background music. No need for something loud, just an ambient music, like a little jazz or something. I think it fit's well to the movie style.

Add some music and you get better grades

[Red Team - 02]

LOL

No more, no less, just...LOL